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| thegirlisgonenow 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseNicely done! I'm not sure I agree with it (my teachers rock) but I definitely see how someone could feel that way and the style makes it stand out even more and helps reinforce what it says. This poem is definitely going on my favs list! |
| hey maria 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseIt amazes me how some people don't get why you wrote "lyk dis." Anyway, this poem is clever and funny and the title conjures images of an army comprised of fifth graders. Love it. |
| Lavender Dylan 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseOk this is definitely going in my favs :D I understand why you used extremely poor spelling/grammer lol but I find this poem very interesting and fun to read, and I kind of agree with the message LOL XD Great Job |
| The Angel in Black 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseWhat on earth was that? I'm very sorry, but I can't understand everything you wrote here. What I could decipher wasn't that good, either. It all seemed like one big complained wrapped in chatspeak. =/ I think you should take the time to rewrite this. Seriously, take the time to translate this nonsense into English. Especially for those of us who can't understand this. |
| Ashelin 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseIt burns! The horrible grammer and chat-talk. I've never really seen it this bad except once, and that girl did it in all her poetry. I looked at another poem of yours and you don't, so I'm grateful for that. But it nearly killed me to read this, but I felt I had to. My eyes are just bleeding now, it's all right. Haha. |