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| Westley 2007-08-25 ch 4,  | abuseMore please! I really like this story, very nice plot...but I'm wwondering if we will get to see Brady besides just Aurora's thoughts about him? |
| typicallyazngurl 2007-08-25 ch 4, | abuseDude, her undying curiosity about Colin's past is only slightly annoying. Okay, it's a lot annoying. I think she reminds me of myself. XD Anyways, even though it is only in the beginning stages, I'm really liking the plot you're developing. I can't wait to delve more into the mystery surrounding this Colin in the near future. :D *hint hint* |
| Rin Hinderson 2007-08-25 ch 3, | abuseSo far this is looking really great. It has a nice storyline and the characters are really fun to read...I especially like Matt! He's such a cute older brother. I only have younger siblings, so I've always wanted an older brother. But I'm rambling now and I'm way off topic. I think i have ADD...augh. Well, keep up the good work! Rin |
| sillylittle-emokid 2007-08-23 ch 3, anon. | abusem anti-druh eh? okay then YAY its fabtastic o i just made up a word er i think i did oj well i like the story reading is my anti-drug O 0_o laters Chaos |
| typicallyazngurl 2007-08-23 ch 3, | abuseIf they are your anti-drug, then I must keep you away from temptation by reviewing! Colin did not come off as a jerk, so that's a good thing. I hate it when I dislike the leading man. =_= I really like how you write this whole story, and it's a plus that Aurora's inability to get over Brady is far from overbearing. I'm really liking this story. Update soon! I hope it keeps raining over there so that you have to write XD |
| typicallyazngurl 2007-08-23 ch 2, | abuseThis story is so ammusing. I'm loving it. A LOT. And now I'm getting all worked up on what Colin's going to be like. Ok. Next chapter now. :D |
| GhettoBread 2007-08-23 ch 3, | abuseYay! Another great chapter, can't wait for more! GB |
| Alice Heist 2007-08-23 ch 3, | abuseWell, I love you drug-free, so I guess I have to review. XD Good chapter. I know who the romantic interest is... Nice conflict, though you were definitely missing some points on Helen of Troy. [sorry, I'm about halfway through it, so I wouldn't really know, but she did ask Hermoine is she wanted to come on a trip with her. And the whole war was really started by Agamemnon, no one expected it to happen...] Anyhow, good chapter. I'm enjoying it. Keep up the good work! alice.heist. |
| Luv-TU 2007-08-23 ch 3, | abuseCan't wait for next chapter. |
| FireFallon 2007-08-21 ch 2, | abuseHaha! Yes! I got my update and I wasn't disappointed! I love this, I hope some more people stop by and review this, it is going to totally be worth their time. Good job. ~Fallon |
| FireFallon 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseWell written, but I want the story!! :) |