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| Daiysis 2007-08-24 ch 1,  | abusehow wonderful! sounds like me... gosh i really have to stop saying that... everything you write sounds like me! i'm a very undecisive and hopeful person with luck on her side =) Anyways, i love how the person was in denial of what was really going around her, story of all our lives at one point really. It's really easy to relate to, great work! |
| ilovebooksandmusic 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseAww cute poem. I liked how it was hopeful, yet uncertain at the end. Good job. |
| Ashelin 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseAw!! That was so cute! I love reading uplifting poems, especially from you. Haha. The ending was perfect too. Did that really happen? Well, even if not, it was a sweet poem. It made me smile. :] |
| perpetual questions 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseCute and kind of innocent. But not sappy or trite in the way love/romance poems sometimes are. Nice work. |
| ohthevoices 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI liked how it seemed hopeful at the end, but uncertain at the same time. |