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| criti-sized 2007-08-21 ch 1,  | abuseThis was such a sweetly ironic short. I like how you go into everything that the protagonist feels in the short, describing how the difference as affected the so badly. I like the way you use your sentening and make the words so full of emotion. C.S. |