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Martin the Waterskier 2008-12-28 . chapter 1
You wrote this beautifully.
I can't really explain what I want to say.

I felt what the narrator was talking about, though I've never been in her situation and I could clearly see what she was talking about, too.

Beautiful, beautiful.

Lovely.

kthnxbai,

Martin the Waterskier
criti-sized 2007-08-21 . chapter 1
This was such a sweetly ironic short. I like how you go into everything that the protagonist feels in the short, describing how the difference as affected the so badly.

I like the way you use your sentening and make the words so full of emotion.

C.S.
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