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| PHOENIXMAN 2007-10-04 ch 1,  | abuseCaptivating. I am lost for words on what to say, you have captured your raw emotion and put it on display. GBU |
| Ye'mawa 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseReading about this fear I suddenly thought: the fear of God leaving me. This poem shows that perfectly, and it is a "normal" feeling to be having when with God. I liked how you showed the enormosity of this fear, because it is, it is something so very painful and real - worse than anything else. Your poem shapes around this perfectly and is very well written, very emotion driven, and I really like it. Excellent work. Thank you. |