I'm so glad love finally grew between them. :)

Absolutely fantastic, i loved it, i admit it would have been better if it was longer but it was reaaly good. well done

I think that this is an extremely wonderful tale that you tell.

Hey Friend of the ABC, if you want to write about the Tudors, there's this amazing series by Carolyn Meyer in which she writes about Catherine of Aragon, Queen Elizabeth the First, Queen Mary, etc, and turns their stories into a fiction story with true facts. She also wrote an amazing fiction book about Anne Hathaway, Will Shakespeare's wife! So, check it out, on Amazon or something.

This story's really good! I've been an member of fiction press for a while but hardly went on it - I basically live on Fan

I liked this story. The tone you set from the beginning was perfect for the length of the story. It was deeply emotional without going into too much angst. I enjoyed it.

Wow, I must say that I was surprised at the length, I definitely thought there would be more. But, it was a cute short story, that was written well. I think you do well with romance and should try your hand at a longer, deeper, more developed one, I think it would be great! I enjoyed this one, good job.

my goodness! This is amazing! You have an amazing writing style and I love this plot! I'm glad this is completed so i can read it all! GREAT JOB so far!

You must have done a lot of reasearch. Love the story. Read and review mine please?

Okay, I must admit, I am really disappointed.
I'm trying not to be mean, but I think you could have written it all so much better. You had a great start, but then it sort of slowly declined towards the edge of the cliff, where it all went reeling off the edge when you ended it so abruptly. I thought you had so much more in store...
You could have shown more emotion and had more fights and dilemmas. More action and more forgiveness, and more LOVE!
I hope that if you edit this someday, you will make it longer and more page-turning-y. And hopefully also post it here, so that I, your almost (and previous) biggest fan can read it and love it.
Because I ABSOLUTELY LOVED the beginning. And the time she brushed away his tears in chapter 3 (or whatever it was, I think I commented on me loving that exact part in a previous review), ahh! I was melting from your superior writing skills. If you only had more of that!
However, I'm not removing this from my Favorites list because it had the makings of such a great story. Also, if you edit this someday, please notify me, because then I'll be there, and I'll read this, and I'll probably love it as well!

Regretfully,
but alas Sincerely,
Georgiana

I loved this story!
Thank you for posting here.
=)

Aww poor Cathy, but yay for the kiss at the end! Short but sweet...I want more of the love story! Please!!

I love the way you are drawing them closer to each other. It's so sad that Mrs. Ford died, but then again, maybe that will force them even closer? I love the way she held him and the way he held her... Aah...
I hope there will be some action soon. Maybe a conflict that will pull their emotions up to the surface, instead of it all being so underlying and hidden. Raw emotion. I think this story needs that, but alas, you are the final judge on that. You write this story exactly as it is meant to be written, I just comment and suggest.

Well, toodleoo for now. I CAN ABSOLUTELY NOT WAIT for the update...
(hint, hint...)
lol
=D

Loved the update.
XD

Four chapters and I am nearly hooked. Very intriguing story, I want to know more.
All I could suggest is to be a little more creative with the book and chapter titles. And to update soon!

hey, i just stumbled upon this story and i am really liking it so far. can't wait for the next chapter=]