Reviews for What We Become - FictionPress.com

Stitch-Puppy 2008-08-19 ch 2,	abuseWell you asked me to review something, how could I possibly turn you down if I saw the word werewolf? You seem to have a pretty good start here. Are you planning on doing the same sort of pattern of switching scenes? That might be a bit confusing. My favorite line "Salihah made to unsheathe her sword, but before she could, she tasted blood as the sword of a man in a black cloak ran her through." Sudden, graphic and impressively blunt. Nice.
Michelle 2007-11-17 ch 2, anon.	abuseI heart... the story...:P
Lady of Confusion 2007-11-10 ch 2,	abusegreat! update son!
Lerene 2007-08-21 ch 1,	abusepretty interesting so far, can't wait to see where you take it.
Lady of Confusion 2007-08-21 ch 1,	abusei like it! update soon!
TheNarglesWillEatYou 2007-08-21 ch 1,	abuseI liked how you created an air of mystery. Why did the girl turn pale? Why do the guards fear her? Update soon!