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| simpleplan13 2007-10-28 ch 1,  | abuseif not yours then mine... than this piece just makes me say aw... So many of us can relate to this piece.. and its nicely done... I really like the phrase "sugarcoating lines" and the idea of living in an uneeded manner... great job |
| Faithless Juliet 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abusePowerful detail, you really used your heart to write these verses. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |
| whispered something profoun... 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseSo sad... I love the first two lines, they start the poem off really strong and you keep it pretty strong the entire way through. |