wonderfully depressing. the rhymes worked and your descriptions were great.

Beautiful.

I ryhmed nicely, lovely in fact. Bravo. It is so wonderful. Words can't even say.

Arigoto.

Hey, I love it. You definitely have writing talent.

Nice. I usually dont likie constant rhymes but this worked rather well. got a little choppy on the 6th line but it didnt hurt it to much so congrats, very good description on what its like to keep failing.