I'm just about getting seriously frustrated with Lisa.
Why won't she just pick a guy and done why does she always have to be cheating. I thought the old Lisa was gone but apparently not.

I thought she was going to stay with Jeremy as weird as that is but now she wants Drew and she's probably going to do Ryan too.

Will you please let her find a guy that she will stick with it and not feel the need to cheat.

Look I just found part one and two of the stories a couple of days ago, and i am not usually interested in incest(since i was raised in a christian house hold,but hey its just a story, and i would never act on those feelings, hopefully never ever)but I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY because regardless, their love is soo intense,strong, and seemingly real, I like this story alot, so please since i am truly caught up on this erraticly cool story, please update soon. PLEASE KEEP, Lisa and Jeremy 2gether, so NO criticism from me.
DOUCES'

i loved the first one and this one is just as good and is another fav!! Jeremy is so not insane. Well maybe a little but he's such a sweetie and he treats lisa like gold. I

I'm glad Lisa finally got away from Steven, it was a good chapter :)

I liked the chapter, but it seemed a little repetitive to me. Cause you know, Jeremy and Drew fight, and then Lisa gets hurt.

Update soon please! I love this stuff!

(P.S, I'd totally watch it if it was on HBO or Showtime. But it seems more like a Soap Opera to me. So maybe on ABC?)

weird but okay update she has to be with drew

'I stared at the house, as it seemed to look the same on the outside; but I knew damn well that the inside was broken in pieces.' I swear, to me, that was almost poetry. Actually, yeah, it was. Haha.

I think I would end up watching it if it was on HBO. And I can actually picture everything. Which brings me to my question...

Since the last update, I keep picturing the characters. I can SEE them, but not... see them? That probably doesn't make muich sense. I can picture their hair and outline, but nothing else. so my question... Have you found any actors or actressed that might resemble Lisa, Jeremy, Drew, etc.?

I really liked this update
And I would watch it!!

omg ausume i cant wia to see whta happens next

oh damn! best chapter ever lol. i love the fight scene :] GO DREW! lol

AH!
don't you loathe having to rewrite chapters over and over?
but this was... brilliance.

i think i know where this is goning...i dont like steven, i wanaa know what his message said...I MISS JEREMRY!

I totally know where you're going with this ;) Sneaky. And I still love your story! It keeps getting better and better!

i THINK i know where you're going with this- haha

i loved it keep it up update soon yay i cnat wait