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| huusasster 2008-02-20 ch 15,  | abuseI'm glad Lisa finally got away from Steven, it was a good chapter :) |
| lestatlover 2008-02-08 ch 15, | abuseI liked the chapter, but it seemed a little repetitive to me. Cause you know, Jeremy and Drew fight, and then Lisa gets hurt. Update soon please! I love this stuff! (P.S, I'd totally watch it if it was on HBO or Showtime. But it seems more like a Soap Opera to me. So maybe on ABC?) |
| iman1234 2008-02-08 ch 15, | abuseweird but okay update she has to be with drew |
| the big crunch 2008-02-07 ch 15, | abuse'I stared at the house, as it seemed to look the same on the outside; but I knew damn well that the inside was broken in pieces.' I swear, to me, that was almost poetry. Actually, yeah, it was. Haha. I think I would end up watching it if it was on HBO. And I can actually picture everything. Which brings me to my question... Since the last update, I keep picturing the characters. I can SEE them, but not... see them? That probably doesn't make muich sense. I can picture their hair and outline, but nothing else. so my question... Have you found any actors or actressed that might resemble Lisa, Jeremy, Drew, etc.? |
| StephiiVengeance 2008-02-06 ch 15, | abuseI really liked this update And I would watch it!! |
| iman1234 2008-01-24 ch 14, | abuseomg ausume i cant wia to see whta happens next |
| frooker-scene 2008-01-23 ch 14, | abuseoh damn! best chapter ever lol. i love the fight scene :] GO DREW! lol |
| the big crunch 2008-01-23 ch 14, | abuseAH! don't you loathe having to rewrite chapters over and over? but this was... brilliance. |
| upsidedown.underwater 2008-01-14 ch 12, | abusei think i know where this is goning...i dont like steven, i wanaa know what his message said...I MISS JEREMRY! |
| lestatlover 2008-01-13 ch 12, | abuseI totally know where you're going with this ;) Sneaky. And I still love your story! It keeps getting better and better! |
| the big crunch 2008-01-12 ch 12, | abusei THINK i know where you're going with this- haha |
| iman1234 2008-01-12 ch 12, | abusei loved it keep it up update soon yay i cnat wait |
| iman1234 2008-01-10 ch 11, | abuseyay i liekd it keep it going |
| upsidedown.underwater 2008-01-08 ch 11, | abusethat was pretty and hot |
| the big crunch 2008-01-07 ch 11, | abusesomehow.. i cant think of anything to write, in a good way, you know? |