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| Duzzie 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseReally now, and you thought MY writing was nice? I can absolutely see that you'd be a musician for every word of every poem of yours I've read so far has been musical and lyrical. I really love them. They're real and emotional and the structure is amazing. Everything flows perfectly. I'm in awe and am very happy I checked out your profile. |
| Tytherpol 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is really pretty. I like the breaks and the visual it paints. The fourth stanza is nice. -ty. |
| Ashelin 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseI liked the silent image of this man. This seemed really real, despite the dreamy like thoughts. Good job. |