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| Tomiko90 2007-08-26 ch 7,  | abuseI found this chapter very funny! :D Great job! Update soon! |
| Tomiko90 2007-08-25 ch 6, | abuseEw that stuff sounded nasty! I like that Cyril is the captain's first mate now! :D I hope something happens to Lump before he can do anything to Cyril! |
| Tomiko90 2007-08-25 ch 5, | abuseAww poor Cyril...he has to sleep in the icky forecastle. I can't wait for your next update! |
| Mango Smoothie 2007-08-24 ch 4, | abuseYeah, I'm starting to think Cyril is smarter than he lets off. But I like the twist at the end. Great chapter! |
| rambles.music.love.life 2007-08-24 ch 5, | abuseVery enjoyable story, so far. :) I like this. |
| Tomiko90 2007-08-22 ch 4, | abuseHahaha I love Cyril! And this is getting a lot more interesting! I can't wait for your next update :D |
| Mango Smoothie 2007-08-22 ch 2, | abuseThe promise of his mother was funny, as he complains about how many people he couldn't kill. I liked it. Nice job. |
| Mango Smoothie 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseHahaha! I read the first few lines of this and it is HI-larious. And it also helps that gusto is a funny word. I like it, extremely funny. |
| Tomiko90 2007-08-22 ch 3, | abusehaha I liked this chapter. It seems to me like Cyril will learn how to do all that stuff soon, and maybe Captain Pink Eye will like him better. Update soon! |
| Tomiko90 2007-08-22 ch 2, | abuseOMG a cliff hanger!! :O I love how Cyril doesn't seem to be afraid of Captain Pink Eye. It's actually pretty hilarious! Oh and I think this would fit nicely in the Young Adult category. |
| Tomiko90 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome! It's the first story I've read on here that deals with pirates. I can't wait to see where you go with this. |