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| fragmented waterfalls 2007-08-22 ch 1,  | abuseAre you referring to sirens? Maybe it's just me, but that's what I'm getting from it. But do you mean (and I'm going out on a limb here, I really shouldn't be trying to decipher your poems; they're too abstract to be broken down into meanings, too wonderfully strange) that once the sailor has awakened from the sea nymphs' cruel grasp, the life he knows is nothing compared to the fictional bliss he held with her? |