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| TwoBeats 2007-10-08 ch 5,  | abuseYou know, I'm all creative in my ways of telling people to give me reviews and blah blah blah. And then when it's time for me myself to give a review I have...nothing to say. Maybe I only think I'm rad in my head. The reality is that I kind of suck. There are cute little lines in this story that make me smile. Like "He tripped over a crack in the sidewalk, and was suddenly back from his daydream." I can picture that happening in my head, and then I smirked. Because I am a mean girl. Wouldn't want it to happen to me though. Write more. Update more. Have a day of your own choice. |
| ilovegreenpuppies 2007-10-06 ch 5, anon. | abusethis is really cute. i like. |
| Dreamless-Wonder 2007-10-06 ch 5, | abuseThanks for updating! Please do so again soon! |
| SummerBaby94 2007-10-05 ch 5, | abuseaw. i love it. fluffy and adorable... i can't wait till they're together! |
| Frenchyesca 2007-10-05 ch 5, | abuseUgh School. Psshh I can't wait 'till college we'll make martinis and take jello shots. You know the usual. |
| Random Word Artist 2007-10-02 ch 4, | abuseAw...so sweet. If you update this, I'll update Less is More. Smiles |
| SummerBaby94 2007-09-18 ch 4, | abuseaw ben's such a sweetheart! so ben likes kara and she likes him and they're solemates or something? |
| Frenchyesca 2007-09-17 ch 4, | abuseAww. Keep goin' |
| random0name 2007-09-16 ch 4, | abuseThis is slightly under dramatic for the internet, but just what it needs. Great story. |
| SummerBaby94 2007-08-24 ch 3, | abuseugh what a jerk. the chapters are really really short. try to get them longer?? |
| Frenchyesca 2007-08-24 ch 3, | abuseDepressing, but good as always. |
| Frenchyesca 2007-08-22 ch 2, | abuseOkay so I did decide to read some of it today. Anyway, me likey! Continue I'm intrigued :). Hahah, the rap part made me laugh. |
| Dreamless-Wonder 2007-08-21 ch 2, | abuseYay, you updated really quickly! Jake is a jerk! Please update again soon. This seems like a very promising story! |
| Dreamless-Wonder 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is really, really, really short. Are the other chapters going to be longer? If they are, or if they aren't, I'll still read this story. It sounds interedting just from reading the summary and this short chapter, so update as soon as you can! I can't wait to read the rest of this story! ~Kelly~ *adds to story alerts* |