The idea for this story is great and I think the title fits it very well. The one thing that I noticed needs work is the tenses. I'm not sure whether its supposed to be in past or present tense. This happens to me too sometimes...which is why I always try to check whether the tenses are correct when I proofread my chapter before submitting. I like this story. I hope you keep it up.

How sad...
Thank you for the great story!

Wonderful.

I'm sorry I haven't read in a while, but I'm starting to read again, and this is a wonderful story you've built up =]

Hahaha, Bravo. That was a great story. As they say, All stories must come toan end.

Haha, another great chapter. It's noce to get reveiws, huh? anyway great job on the whole story.

Gah! I love this story! her family is so messed up. I felt like cyring, that doesn't happen easily so that automaticaly dubs u an awsome writer. Please update soon!

This is really interesting... I've never read a story like this...

I loved it.
The last line made me almost cry, I can relate to her.
Keep writing!

Please update soon!

Awesome Story!

hmm... I hope you update soon.

The clear solution to all of her problems is to move out of her parents' house. The end of all her issues. First she would need to get a job though, maybe she could move in with a friend? It makes such sense, and it's obvious. Shouldn't a 17 year old have figured it out by then?

A deer caught in the headlights... That is a great simile. Can I use it for whatever pathetic poems and stories I may or may not write?

~Weighs, you wrote ways ~"...does your parents have to be such busy-bodies..." The verb should be do, cause parents is plural

Hm... Why would her mother be like that? Instinct and logic would indicate her wanting to make the best of her second daughter's life, rather than only focusing on one that could be considered a "failure". I ponder this...

Her mom at the end... How embarassing... I can't think of many more embarassing things... Well written