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| Jewria 2008-07-03 ch 10,  | abuseHow sad... Thank you for the great story! |
| Jewria 2008-07-03 ch 9, | abuseWonderful. |
| Jewria 2008-07-03 ch 8, | abuseI'm sorry I haven't read in a while, but I'm starting to read again, and this is a wonderful story you've built up =] |
| Words of Silence 2008-06-09 ch 10, | abuseHahaha, Bravo. That was a great story. As they say, All stories must come toan end. |
| Words of Silence 2008-05-13 ch 9, | abuseHaha, another great chapter. It's noce to get reveiws, huh? anyway great job on the whole story. |
| Words of Silence 2008-05-03 ch 8, | abuseGah! I love this story! her family is so messed up. I felt like cyring, that doesn't happen easily so that automaticaly dubs u an awsome writer. Please update soon! |
| Hatake-san 2008-05-02 ch 8, | abuseThis is really interesting... I've never read a story like this... |
| Jewria 2008-03-29 ch 7, | abuseI loved it. The last line made me almost cry, I can relate to her. Keep writing! |
| Jewria 2008-03-20 ch 6, | abusePlease update soon! |
| Jewria 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abuseAwesome Story! |
| Arina222 2008-01-11 ch 5, | abusehmm... I hope you update soon. |
| Arina222 2008-01-11 ch 4, | abuseThe clear solution to all of her problems is to move out of her parents' house. The end of all her issues. First she would need to get a job though, maybe she could move in with a friend? It makes such sense, and it's obvious. Shouldn't a 17 year old have figured it out by then? |
| Arina222 2008-01-11 ch 3, | abuseA deer caught in the headlights... That is a great simile. Can I use it for whatever pathetic poems and stories I may or may not write? |
| Arina222 2008-01-11 ch 2, | abuse~Weighs, you wrote ways ~"...does your parents have to be such busy-bodies..." The verb should be do, cause parents is plural Hm... Why would her mother be like that? Instinct and logic would indicate her wanting to make the best of her second daughter's life, rather than only focusing on one that could be considered a "failure". I ponder this... Her mom at the end... How embarassing... I can't think of many more embarassing things... Well written |
| Arina222 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseThe irony! A very good application of it. |