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Isca 2008-08-25 ch 1,	abuse"Please...do it quickly." We all feel hurt sometimes, but you're right, it's better if it's a quick kind of pain, rather than a long-lasting one.
Icrome 2008-07-30 ch 1,	abusevery true statement that very few follow
Addyson 2008-07-27 ch 1,	abusePrize review for Review Marathon. That poem totally tells the truth. You'd rather have more pain in less amount of time, then less pain extended for a long period of time. I liked how it sounded nice, but, I think that it could be better if you made it just a little longer. But that's just me. Great job!!
XsilentXescapeX 2008-03-27 ch 1,	abuseLovely.Simply lovely.
Fractured Illusion 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abuseWe meet again, winner of the holy Review Marathon! Feel speshul! :P Okay: starting with an "and"? That's sort of weird. Doesn't feel poem-y at all. More like...dialog? Other than that I liked this poem too! All the stanzas were imaginative and though they pretty much said the same thing, it wasn't boring and kept my attention. Well used metaphor! (see, this is how I meant in one of my first reviews! Focus on one rather than several. You'll get much more successful results) :3 Keep it up! - Frac
Everything to you 2008-02-24 ch 1,	abuseSo sad! But I love it nonetheless! Short and sweet and to the point.
Dormio 2008-02-24 ch 1,	abuseNiice. I really like it. That's all I guess.
Dreaming Chica 2008-02-23 ch 1,	abuseI liked the refferences to taking off the Band Aid. This was really well written, good imagery! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥
Sexy vampirechick 2008-02-20 ch 1,	abuseI totally love this poem.I had such a powerful meaning behind those words.
smile for the sunshine 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abusedoesn't that always feel true...i don't know why but this reminds me of a really cute song by relient k called, "overthinking". here are the lyrics: "i was thinking, overthinking. there are just too many scenarios, to analyze, you are my dream please come true... ...and i could break my heart in two more times than you could ever do. you are my dream please oome true." good work. keep writing.
Blissfully Sarcastic 2007-12-06 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this. Creative, very creative. Just one little thing that caught my attention... It's not wrong--you can keep it as it is and still be grammatically correct--just something that doesn't tickle my fancy. Starting off the poem with the word 'and' seems strange. That's about the only thing I dislike about this poem. Otherwise, great job; good title; good flow.
Emmytastic gal 2007-12-01 ch 1,	abuseThis poem is gorgeous, beautiful, eloquent. Lovely...you have such a flair for writing. You manage to create such vivid pictures in so few words, its a gift. I understand this completely...Keep up the exceptional work. Thank you so much for the heart warming review, also!:)
Gothic Spook 2007-11-16 ch 1,	abuseI love it! I can see it in two ways with the metaphor of the bandaid. Either it is the pain of having a bandaid being ripped off (which bloody hurts in my opinion!) in response to the pain of the breakup or that the bandaid was a kind of sheild protecting from the pain of the breakup. Either way I love it! A strong meaning in a short piece.
B. M. Reed 2007-11-05 ch 1,	abuseYou know, this is weird, but at this particular moment, I can relate to this. I mean, stuff that happened recently makes me realize that yes, ripping it off is the best thing. This is a good little piece.
Manuel Fajar 2007-09-27 ch 1,	abuseHow kind is love when slowly it devolves From passion's heat to dissolution's cold, — So little solace in this Entropy Inevitable our poor heart must feel How fay is love when wryly it evolves From ashes scattered without sparked hope bright, — Thus unexpected strong whirlwind takes heart From mundane earth to regions nether high Life finds no resolution to this quirk Love's dirk that causes heart to red tears bleed ¿So what's to do, but smile and smirk? Banish mirk, — gone today'll be back again

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