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| IdeasInTheAir 2007-08-23 ch 1,  | abuseIt's so beautiful! I really like your poetry, it's all really well done. I don't know how you think up of these things. I can never right poetry, not like that. Oh, the only typo I saw was when you said wait, there really are starts. It should've been stars, right? Yeah. But it doesn't really take anything away from the whole poem for me, because I make a million errors on every page like repeating a sentene that I was really excited about writing over and over without meaning to. Crazy. I love it. Really. I can't really describe why, because I can't claim to understand it. But I love it. =)=)=)=) |
| Ashelin 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked the ending. Same as PQ on the typos. But it's not deathly important or anything. I liked the subject, good job. It felt really...real. |
| perpetual questions 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseThe theme of stars is beautiful. And the ending is touching. You might want to recheck this for typos. Not to be obnoxious or anything. |