It's so beautiful! I really like your poetry, it's all really well done. I don't know how you think up of these things. I can never right poetry, not like that.
Oh, the only typo I saw was when you said wait, there really are starts. It should've been stars, right? Yeah. But it doesn't really take anything away from the whole poem for me, because I make a million errors on every page like repeating a sentene that I was really excited about writing over and over without meaning to. Crazy.
I love it. Really. I can't really describe why, because I can't claim to understand it. But I love it.
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I liked the ending. Same as PQ on the typos. But it's not deathly important or anything. I liked the subject, good job. It felt really...real.

The theme of stars is beautiful. And the ending is touching.

You might want to recheck this for typos. Not to be obnoxious or anything.