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| Ashelin 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseI too love the ending. GAH. Me and my obsession with the ending of things. But really, I do. This was really heartfelt and cute in a way. Good job. |
| Nonya Soum 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseGreat! I like the simplicity and ease of your words. I think the words "so maybe, so maybe" really capture a kind of plucking petals off flowers image in my head. You don't even have much imagery yet my mind is filled with images after reading this poem. That's talent, I say. Fantastic job!! Write on!! |
| a silenced revolution 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseI love the last line. The repetition of so maybe, so maybe is effective. Nice work as always. |