I too love the ending. GAH. Me and my obsession with the ending of things. But really, I do. This was really heartfelt and cute in a way. Good job.

Great! I like the simplicity and ease of your words. I think the words "so maybe, so maybe" really capture a kind of plucking petals off flowers image in my head. You don't even have much imagery yet my mind is filled with images after reading this poem. That's talent, I say. Fantastic job!!

Write on!!

I love the last line. The repetition of so maybe, so maybe is effective. Nice work as always.