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| DiaRose 2007-08-22 ch 1,  | abuseYou know, I'm not a huge fan of short poetry but I really like this. It's very nicely felt. There are some problems with spacing and capitalization, but it's good. |
| Ashelin 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseThis kind of cut me up inside. I can't pick a line, because they all were so vivid to me. I loved it and hated it at the same time...can I do that? Well, wonderful job. |
| Princess-anna57 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuse"See my hands covered in metaphoric blood." - Brilliant. In fact, the whole poem is brilliant. Great work. Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| a silenced revolution 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseI like the mysteriousness of the pronouns. Dark and intriguing. |