You know, I'm not a huge fan of short poetry but I really like this. It's very nicely felt. There are some problems with spacing and capitalization, but it's good.

This kind of cut me up inside. I can't pick a line, because they all were so vivid to me. I loved it and hated it at the same time...can I do that? Well, wonderful job.

"See my hands covered in
metaphoric blood." - Brilliant. In fact, the whole poem is brilliant. Great work. Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^

I like the mysteriousness of the pronouns. Dark and intriguing.