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Reviews For: Metaphoric Blood
DiaRose 2007-08-22 . chapter 1
You know, I'm not a huge fan of short poetry but I really like this. It's very nicely felt. There are some problems with spacing and capitalization, but it's good.
Ashelin 2007-08-22 . chapter 1
This kind of cut me up inside. I can't pick a line, because they all were so vivid to me. I loved it and hated it at the same time...can I do that? Well, wonderful job.
Princess-anna57 2007-08-21 . chapter 1
"See my hands covered in
metaphoric blood." - Brilliant. In fact, the whole poem is brilliant. Great work. Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^
a silenced revolution 2007-08-21 . chapter 1
I like the mysteriousness of the pronouns. Dark and intriguing.
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