Another awesome chapter. The opening dream was highly entertaining and sexy. I think Faye may just be getting used to Blaise. He can actually be quite charming when his demon instincts aren't making him look like a complete ass. I really like this story and think it's a step up from Twilight. now watch you're going to tell me that this story is now on your other site and if it is, well we're just going to have to see.

Blaise needs to really let up on his demon anger and try to listen to Allister. He obviously knows what he's talking about when it comes to humans and love. Blaise is a total blundering idiot. Don't get me wrong, I love him but he just needs to stop and think out what he's going to do next and eject whatever foot has landed in his mouth and got stuck or whatever butt has become his face today. how did I create that last saying? sometimes I amaze myself with my sarcasm.

AWESOME! This is pure genius. I think Blaise is hotter than Edward Cullen and coming from an avid Twilight fan, that's saying a lot. I think he's even hotter than Chase from 'Charmed'! I want to read more so thank you for getting me hooked.

You write very well, and this story was captivating. However, the only thing I have against it is the main character. She seems awfully whiny for my liking. Perhaps this was the way you intended her to be, I don't know. Other than that this was very interesting, and original. I look foreward to reading more of your work.

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Malice

I like this story. but it bothers me that she seems to be so whinny... She's basically an adult. Time to mature past everything revolving around her.

I think it is a cute book tho :)

Blaise sure does purr a lot

XD

Cool story
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I emphathise. I've lost many a two-thousand word chapter too from not pressing the SAVE button. But unlike you, I felt like crying for ten minutes and then made the decision I would NEVER continue the story.

And true, to my word- I haven't.

I applaud your resilience XD

Wow, i loved this even more than the execution of the heart! The whole demon-mate thing is is amazing and romantic, Blaise is such an amzing and sexy character and even though he can be controlling and possesive, his protectiveness is what every girl wants. Cant wait ot read the sequel!

Awesome awesome awesome story. I really liked it. I especially thought that she was realistic, because she wasn't just like "oh, I love you completely and want to get married and have 2.5 kids" from the beginning. In fact, she wasn't even like that in the end. It made it a lot more interesting, because when the main female character's like that, it gets really boring.

Loved this story. I rate it a 10 out of a ten.

heii omg i waz up tile 3:30 am reading ur story it waz so good i cant wait tileapple i think it is
anyway great story ur a fab writer and i lov them
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Hey, Awesome story.

I had read the first chapter at the begining of last year or halfway through, Anyway. I never got around to finishing it and I was tempted to delete it from my favourite websites many times thinking I would never finish. But here I am! ^^/

I finished it in three day's and I loved it. I wish you had been able to write more but it was cool.

Loved the stories, Keep writing. ^^/

i love it!! it's certainly entertaining, though i do feel bad for travis.
Blaise is amazing, though i like Faye better. she's so amusing to read about. by the way, for not liking to write those sex scenes, you did a very good job ;)

I just have to say that I really love the story so far. I really liked the slow transition from Faye absolutely hating Blaise to kind of liking him a little bit. Good job!

It's good, but it would definitely benefit from being read over a time or two before being submitted to fiction press. It had a lot of simple spelling errors.

Aside from that, I didn't understand why, at the ending, you suddenly stopped using quotation marks for the speech. You used them all the way up until the last four paragraphs.

Keep writing, it's interesting.