hooked the moment i read the first sentences..teehhee

Naw! That's so cute!

Laurie
-x-

ur story is not believeable...its well writtenn..but who talks like this in high school...nobody cares if u get top marks..dey prolly hate ppl for it..."thanks for your praise"?um...okay...

aw this is such a UNIQE story line! I love the 'mountain metafore' that you constantly use :)

Aw... cute story! keep writing!

sque! such a sweet / cute ending ^^ is that the end of the whole thing?

whe.
U editted it.
Well...
At least i didn't review this chapter && i can comment on ur uber pro editting
=]

And the end is much more sque-ful now wif da extra scenes
^^

*superflyingtacklehug*

HwaaXD Fluff ^^ Hehehehe=D Ooh, you did a three-shot XD
Lovely

=__=
Such a meanie ^^ And he sounds like a guy I know... *hint* ...except for the loud, mean factor.
Alwin got 100% again for a class test ><
The first class average was only 74% and he had to get 100...
Gar.

Hehehe. Cute=D

Wow! A great story, I thorougly enjoyed it, a cool plot too and I love the title, great touch!
Tecna ;)

um... i really like the plot and everything... but the characters seem so flat and unreal. I can't connect with them and that is what reading is supposed to do. When you right something so short you have to involve more conflit in a certain period of time to show us how they react and make us love them. Maybe you should make this a one-shot. Having three chapters isn't needed becasue your story is so short.

Yay for nerds! Nothing warms up a bed like a cute nerd! LOL. Um, this chapter seems kind of unrelated to the one before, and it does seem a little bit rushed... Does this have to be the last chapter? *tear* I loved this story so much!

I read this at school. *feels happy* Was I the first to read it? If I was, then you will probably be able to hear me squeeing in my rather high-pitched tones. *nods*

Iris has a story! We shall invite her to 'art of ignorance' as well, kay? For the soap-opera (Forever: So Overrated). ^^

Anyways, you heard my comments, though yeah, a rewrite might be nice... *keke*

x.akeyana

P.S. (eep, I'm scared xoxluurve's fangirls are going to come after me...)

P.P.S. Andandand someone else reviewed Scribbles. I'll send to you on MSN, kay?

SQUE!!
*insert that uber pro emoticon u made*
xD

i finally get 2 read the rest of ur story coz the theory test is finished && i dnt hav 2 study anymore
*nods*

somehow ur story reminds me of something along the lines of a Minh-Huan/Cynthia romance
O__O

but it's sweet
xD