this is a really great and wonderful addicting good story to read since i first started reading it your a really author who wrote this realy great and wonderful good story.

The story was decent, except the ending, which was kind of lacking. I mean, it was just like he saves her, they return, Amy bites him, they marry, the end. It was kind of...I don't know, anti-climatic.

YAY! i totally thought it was gonna be an unhappy ending and that i was gonna have to come and STARE at you until u changed it to a happy ending.
=P lols
damn am i glad thati won't have to
i so don't have the patience or time or... well okay i just can't be bothered
anyways...
amazing story
i seriously loved it
if this was an actual book i would totally buy it!congrats on writing my all time fave story!!

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to shocked 2 write...

holy crap
i guess she should of listened instead of nodding along
huh
that sucks
anyways...
gotta rd!

damn he can be an ** sometimes
seriously
he called her old? When he's a 300 year old vampire??
damn thats messed up!
lols

wow i am truly in love with this story!
it's so good
plus it makes complete sense which i always a bonus =]
i have no criticism as this story doesn't need it!
congraats on writing it!

omg! this is an AMAZING story!
Seriously, congrats ono writting it
i would be pretty damn proud myself if i ever wrote something this good
now i gotta carry on reading!

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still too shocked to write anything useful!
(:O)

omg
too shocked too write a good review...
gotta read on!

wow i luv this story!
its so good! its really funni too!
lols
she faints so much!
gotta read on!!

Brilliant story!

OK i gotta go to bed
but i've added you to my favourites so i can find this awesome story again
thank god you've finished cause i think i'd die if i had to wait as long as you say you took to update each chapter!

I can't believe your only in year 11! you should publish your story it's so good!


Congratulations!

I can't stop reading...

I'm reviewing again like you asked cause i want to make you happy :D
your profile says that your country is italy but then you say that you live in australia... Want to enlighten me?
A great chapter again but i thought that i should point out that every now and then you start speaking in the present tense though i think it's just cause you make a typo like forgetting the last letter of the word or something.
I bet jared saved her right?
i think i'm right!
Fantastic chapter!