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| ShadowFane 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseWow...I don't know what to say...Quite honestly, I'm speechless. It's beautiful, and it flows wonderfully, and I can even imagine you singing it. Lol. The content and the emotion, though...makes my chest hurt...almost like I feel what your feeling, and then some...or it may just be me. Anyway, I like this. You're awesome, you know that? SF |
| Bandits Sonado 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseOkay... Just okay... I don't really know what to say in a comment about it so i'll save it til I talk to you... You're a good writer though... It flows fairly nicely and is easy to follow... Good work.. ~R.A. |