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| kristenn987 2008-05-10 ch 1,  | abusethis was really cute! i really liked how you wrote about each story. i loved all of the couples! they seemed to all be matched together really well. i think it would be great if you'd write an epilogue though. maybe with all of the girls together talking about their weeks and the guys, or with all eight of them together. that would be really fun to read, i think, seeing them all interacting. |
| HelloLovely 2007-11-06 ch 5, | abuseThis is the sweetest story I have ever read. I love it! Thank you for writing such a great story. |
| MzKit10 2007-09-22 ch 5, | abuseaww. This has to be my favorite. Its perfect. it lacks a certain dog but it makes up for it. His little admission after the last wager, about loving her, very poetic but adorable. You are a brilliant writer and i have no criticism. |
| MzKit10 2007-09-22 ch 4, | abuseI love rosco! and Mac is such a flirt, well i guess within reason but meh and its another cute ending. She really wants to believe he didn't cheat, you've portrayed that brilliantly. I love that doggie darn it! and i approve in your choice of movie...i think... |
| MzKit10 2007-09-22 ch 3, | abuseOH they are cute to watch...well read. ANYWAY Jadyn and Corina, a very dynamic relationship, it seems very easy-going. very fun to read and quite enjoyable. Woo! |
| MzKit10 2007-09-22 ch 2, | abuseokay, i'm going to comment as i read through because i feel like it and everyone loves reviews, even if they're out of date and soon to be redone hehe. gosh! Layden is sweet, yet slightly tactless... he's so cute! hehe. I can't wait to find out what the boys are up to...yey! |
| RoseLife 2007-09-06 ch 5, | abuseCUTE! When i first read the 'will you marry me?' question, i was like 'WOAH!' but its so kool how they each got their happy endings =P Wait... they did say 'yes' didnt they?! lol haha. hope that they did! XD but great job! they were all so sweet!XD so well done! ~RL~ |
| Nicole Deming 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseI like your story I cant wait to read more of them. |
| ihrtbks 2007-09-02 ch 5, | abuseAw! I'm jealous now; your stories are SO cute! My favorite out of this set was Corina and Jadyn; they're so cute together. Well, all your couples are cute together, but the history of these two was the best: my first kiss under the cherry tree. I love how you showed the parallels between them all...the early awakening, the "I've always loved you", and the proposal...yet still make them all unique. Just put empty lines in instead of breaks (press 'enter' twice instead of once). I HEART THIS STORY! *FAVORITES* |
| ophelia 2007-08-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseaw...so adorkablee!! |
| Singers To The Back 2007-08-24 ch 4, | abuseHAHA. Clever. No other choice, eh ? |
| Singers To The Back 2007-08-24 ch 3, | abuseInteresting.. Another 'Will you marry me?' |
| Singers To The Back 2007-08-24 ch 2, | abuseThe last question startled me ! |
| Delicacy of the Mind 2007-08-23 ch 5, | abuseaw, this is so cute! though you never know if they say yes, but i would hope they did. |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-08-22 ch 5, | abuseTHose were the sweetest stories ever!! |