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| Alexa 2007-09-12 ch 1, anon. | abuse+la bla bla...:-@povesti fara sfarsit~X(...ai o imaginatie bolnava...esti NEBUNA:O:O:O...dar...A FOST PREA MARFA:X:X:X:X:X:X:X:X...=p~mai vreau=p~ |
| Ark Navy 2007-08-23 ch 1,  | abuseI came to seeking a good horror story to hopefully inspire and help me find the right mindset to actually transpose a short horror story of my own for a long overdue project. And I've found it, at long last. The story itself was magnificant, with chilling descriptions and interesting actions. The grammar, however--mostly in the second part of the story--could use some work. Punctuation before closing a set of quotations, a bit of repetative dialouge, not much descriptions for the dialouge itself (though it oculd be a part style thing), and a missing word here and there... if those could be fixed then this would be a true master piece. ::adds to favs:: |