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| simpleplan13 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abusepowerful and beautiful piece... I love the part about brains splattering into rainbows... that was awesome...I like the ending also... "mass destruction seeps through our skin" is an awesome concept.. beautiful piece |
| whispered something profoun... 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abusethis poem is absolutely filled with beautiful imagery. |
| doxology 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseOh, I love the last line. This sounded true and pure, which I findd hard to write. It seemed to me, like these words just rolled off your lips or your pen or your brain. You make it look too easy. Great job. Peace and Love ~> does anyone park here? |