Coolness... less sci-fi than the other one in a way, but now I'm really intrigued by what happens between "Perfection" and "Dark Love"...

That was absolutely horridly sad. but wonderful! really. just sad... its like she didn't really grasp the concept of him dying until he just did suicide.. although i dont understand; i thought that the whole world was gone and basically they killed the whole entire earth. but after he kills himself she has someone to report to; higher powers? like whom? and. um. hah. i think she's stupid. but then, how can you have a relationship with someone made of 'endless' space? doesn't make much sense but i liked it all.

Hey, hey! Nice job. I love the occasional one-shot, and this was pretty damn cool. Explained everything that needed to explained without delving into unneccesary periods of explanation. Beautiful job. I liked the characters, they both seemed very real, aside from the whole demigod powerhouse kind of thing. XD.

Anyhow, I usually don't like Sci-Fi but that was nicely done and a neat read. Keep it up!

-Stewey