Good poem.

Twilight Starr

"so I loved you 'cause I wanted you to love me back"

"I need a flashlight to see in the dark of your heart"

I really like those lines. especially the first one. really strong... really speaks to me. good work.

This is diferent. But i love it! It confused me at first... but then I got what you we're saying. Keep up the great work!

Kristie Marie

Well written. I like. Keep writing.

Anna _