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Reviews For: All We Can Do Is Hope

kloun doll
2008-06-12
ch 1,
abusewow, I like the first part about the man saving a stranger
why did the stranger rob his body? it's a curious story I'd like to know. the whole poem makes me think how ironic is life.
Wolf's Night
2007-11-24
ch 1,
abuseNice portrayal of the real world. Its sad that hope sometimes isn't enough though :(
Ashley-chan
2007-09-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was...beautiful. I loved it. Just...words cant pin how I felt. It just kinda spoke to me.
TragicDreams
2007-08-29
ch 1,
abuseThis is very sad. I like it though. This kind of stuff really does happen in the world which makes it even sadder. Keep writing!
A little birdie once told m...
2007-08-26
ch 1,
abuseThis is amazing. Instead of portraying the world as a lovely "butterflies and unicorns" place to live, you showed how much of a dog eat dog place we really live in. You demonstrated the truth about the truth and the horror of human nature. Well done. Adding to favorites.
criti-sized
2007-08-22
ch 1,
abuseWell, the poem was very nice. There were a few phrases in it that I felt didn't exactly gel with the pace of the poem. I couldn't gather the tone it was setting off in order to read it. But the wording was very powerful and the meaning of it resonates easily.

C.S.
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