Again, the reason I did not watch the news anymore, too depressing.

But you are right there is still hope.

I can see this poem happening in real life, like real events caught on film.

The format is great and the word choice stunning.

I should remember poem when I have my class of my students.

Great job.

wow, I like the first part about the man saving a stranger

why did the stranger rob his body? it's a curious story I'd like to know. the whole poem makes me think how ironic is life.

Nice portrayal of the real world. Its sad that hope sometimes isn't enough though :(

That was...beautiful. I loved it. Just...words cant pin how I felt. It just kinda spoke to me.

This is very sad. I like it though. This kind of stuff really does happen in the world which makes it even sadder. Keep writing!

This is amazing. Instead of portraying the world as a lovely "butterflies and unicorns" place to live, you showed how much of a dog eat dog place we really live in. You demonstrated the truth about the truth and the horror of human nature. Well done. Adding to favorites.

Well, the poem was very nice. There were a few phrases in it that I felt didn't exactly gel with the pace of the poem. I couldn't gather the tone it was setting off in order to read it. But the wording was very powerful and the meaning of it resonates easily.

C.S.