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| kloun doll 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abusewow, I like the first part about the man saving a stranger why did the stranger rob his body? it's a curious story I'd like to know. the whole poem makes me think how ironic is life. |
| Wolf's Night 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseNice portrayal of the real world. Its sad that hope sometimes isn't enough though :( |
| Ashley-chan 2007-09-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was...beautiful. I loved it. Just...words cant pin how I felt. It just kinda spoke to me. |
| TragicDreams 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is very sad. I like it though. This kind of stuff really does happen in the world which makes it even sadder. Keep writing! |
| A little birdie once told m... 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazing. Instead of portraying the world as a lovely "butterflies and unicorns" place to live, you showed how much of a dog eat dog place we really live in. You demonstrated the truth about the truth and the horror of human nature. Well done. Adding to favorites. |
| criti-sized 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseWell, the poem was very nice. There were a few phrases in it that I felt didn't exactly gel with the pace of the poem. I couldn't gather the tone it was setting off in order to read it. But the wording was very powerful and the meaning of it resonates easily. C.S. |