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Reviews For: All We Can Do Is Hope
Fox May 2008-08-06 . chapter 1
Again, the reason I did not watch the news anymore, too depressing.
But you are right there is still hope.

I can see this poem happening in real life, like real events caught on film.
The format is great and the word choice stunning.
I should remember poem when I have my class of my students.

Great job.
kloun mannequin 2008-06-12 . chapter 1
wow, I like the first part about the man saving a stranger
why did the stranger rob his body? it's a curious story I'd like to know. the whole poem makes me think how ironic is life.
Wolf's Night 2007-11-24 . chapter 1
Nice portrayal of the real world. Its sad that hope sometimes isn't enough though :(
Ashley-chan 2007-09-02 . chapter 1
That was...beautiful. I loved it. Just...words cant pin how I felt. It just kinda spoke to me.
TragicDreams 2007-08-29 . chapter 1
This is very sad. I like it though. This kind of stuff really does happen in the world which makes it even sadder. Keep writing!
A little birdie once told me. 2007-08-26 . chapter 1
This is amazing. Instead of portraying the world as a lovely "butterflies and unicorns" place to live, you showed how much of a dog eat dog place we really live in. You demonstrated the truth about the truth and the horror of human nature. Well done. Adding to favorites.
criti-sized 2007-08-22 . chapter 1
Well, the poem was very nice. There were a few phrases in it that I felt didn't exactly gel with the pace of the poem. I couldn't gather the tone it was setting off in order to read it. But the wording was very powerful and the meaning of it resonates easily.

C.S.
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