| Reviews for All We Can Do Is Hope |
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Fox May 8/6/08 . chapter 1Again, the reason I did not watch the news anymore, too depressing. But you are right there is still hope. I can see this poem happening in real life, like real events caught on film. The format is great and the word choice stunning. I should remember poem when I have my class of my students. Great job. |
kloun mannequin 6/12/08 . chapter 1wow, I like the first part about the man saving a stranger why did the stranger rob his body? it's a curious story I'd like to know. the whole poem makes me think how ironic is life. |
Wolf's Night 11/24/07 . chapter 1Nice portrayal of the real world. Its sad that hope sometimes isn't enough though :( |
Ashley-chan 9/2/07 . chapter 1 That was...beautiful. I loved it. Just...words cant pin how I felt. It just kinda spoke to me. |
TragicDreams 8/29/07 . chapter 1This is very sad. I like it though. This kind of stuff really does happen in the world which makes it even sadder. Keep writing! |
Goodnight Nickname 8/26/07 . chapter 1This is amazing. Instead of portraying the world as a lovely "butterflies and unicorns" place to live, you showed how much of a dog eat dog place we really live in. You demonstrated the truth about the truth and the horror of human nature. Well done. Adding to favorites. |
criti-sized 8/22/07 . chapter 1Well, the poem was very nice. There were a few phrases in it that I felt didn't exactly gel with the pace of the poem. I couldn't gather the tone it was setting off in order to read it. But the wording was very powerful and the meaning of it resonates easily. C.S. |