I love your story well the two chapters are awesome because they´re so romantic.just the way i like it.
Please continue them soon.
Take care
Bye

It was interesting... but kinda rushed and... i didn't really understand the english? kinda messed up english... like the title "it start with a kiss" shouldn't it be it starts with a kiss? and the summary thing was kinda messed up too.. but the story's not too bad