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| the bizarrist 2007-09-14 ch 1,  | abuseVery sweet. Glad to hear everything's good. Sorry again. |
| Ammom 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseI actually caught myself counting the letters. I like how though it wasn't a letter to someone, but you added the p.s. anyways. The similes are good and speak of real emotion. |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good, I loved the ending. Keep it up! |
| Elegant Raven 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseShort, but true to your emotions. I like the descriptions and even though it's short, you still can feel what you feel. I like it, but I personally think it would be better and more relatable if you elaborated. |