love sure is tricky isnt it...sigh...

she is so ...arg... selfish! Holding down one man while talking love to another. *fuming*

Nice poem. >_

*gasp* I just realized...


Oh. *I'm an idiot.*

good poem though...

Hey that's mean.It's totaly ignorance,how can she do that?Tie someone down while she loves another.

Yet this can be seen throughout the world.So selfish of us humans,eh? Nicely described!

Well, the poem definitely has a nice flow to it, that give us readers an idea of how to go about reading it.

I like the wording of your poem that you used, being that the wording is the most important thing. But I found the last line awkward. It felt like it was kind of forced there.

Otherwise that I enjoyed it a lot.

C.S.

ohh! i HATE when people do that!
its so true, the writing didnt even register. its not that bad tho, ur just being to analytical of ur own stuff. its ok, happens to the best of us