|Reviews for Adopted Mafia|
| missboo13 1/5/08 . chapter 19
I don't remember if I ever reviewed this story before...I think I did, but I don't know. Anyways, I really, really enjoyed reading it. I'm sorry I didn't review more to tell you what I thought of it, but I loved it from the beginning. Good job!
| HelloLovely 1/5/08 . chapter 19
I love this story! It was so cute. I can't believe it's over, but the ending was great! So happy they ended together.
| Arabella Smith 1/5/08 . chapter 19
So good! I loved the whole thing! I wish that the ending was a tad bit longer, but toher than that.. i really really like it!
| Leslie Marie 1/4/08 . chapter 19
Haha, I just read my name! I feel so loved :)
OMG! It's over? I can't believe it's actually over and that ending! Yay! I must say if Tony and Payton hadn't ended up together I would have been fairly dissapointed but they ended up together and that makes me smile :D amazing amazing AMAZING! That's what you and your stories are... AMAZING!
I feel inspired. I'm gonna go finish chapter 6 and try to get it posted tonight. Its gonna be really long. It's 5 pages long already and I'm not done yet! I think I need to go read another one of your stories after that!
| xMidnight Angelx 1/4/08 . chapter 19
good job. you've done well.
| animejerk 1/4/08 . chapter 19
welcome im glad you like it hehehe good story cute cute cute
| Leslie Marie 1/4/08 . chapter 18
Ugh! You're so mean! The end is so close we can taste it and you keep it from us? Meanie! Haha j/k!
Wow! Tony is the new don now and Payton LEFT! NO! She has to come back and marry Tony and rule the Mafia with him! She can't just run away! I refuse to accept that she has left for good. Stupid Payton and her stupid free-spirit!
I really really want you to post the last chapter but I don't want it to be over... I'm torn! But not too torn... POST IT! Please please please!
| animejerk 1/3/08 . chapter 18
i must say this went quick only mone more chapter till its done
| HelloLovely 1/3/08 . chapter 18
OH MY GOSH! Please update like... NOW! Haha. I love this story so much and I don't want it to end, but... I ned to see how it ends at the same time. I really hope then end up together, they seem like they belong together. UPDATE! POST! PLEASE! OKay, I think that's enough outta me.
| Leslie Marie 1/2/08 . chapter 17
The son (ANdrew) died, right? In a way that's what she wanted but I like her charcter even more now because even though she wanted revenge you could still tell she has some remorse when he died. ANd wow... she was actually very respectful to Tony, big shocker there.
The story is almost done? NO! Say it isn't so! I'm not ready for it to be over yet! :(
Hm... let's see... What did I like? Oh I don't know, probably EVERYTHING! The story just flows so nicely and the characters seem believable and their relationships are just so freaking entertaining! It's pretty much AMAZING!
YOU are the princess of the mafia (stories, lol!)
YAY YOU! :D
| Leslie Marie 1/2/08 . chapter 16
Payton is awesome, she's the kind of girl I wish I could be sometimes. She totally kicks ass and she knows it! I want to be her minus the being in the mob part... I like having a non-threatening lifestyle (I work a daycare for goodness sakes!)
Good chapter :)
| animejerk 1/2/08 . chapter 17
yea kick his ass now what im a person who like the guess ending surprisly im drawing a blank
| animejerk 1/2/08 . chapter 16
well now we know the traitior good on yea by the way im guess when making charters tony was the first one up usally in mofia hahahah lol jk any way but why the name payton is cause its chatlly pay ton like is an pay tons of money orsomthing i just want too know
| Arabella Smith 12/30/07 . chapter 15
I love it!
It's so good!
| Audrey Bronte 12/29/07 . chapter 1
I love Mafia stories, and yours is GREAT. I loved everything, and I'm so going to check out your other works on here. Great job!