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| covered 2007-09-18 ch 19,  | abuseooh it was kind of dark! but i liked it anyway (: it was a good story |
| ProcrastinationLUVSme 2007-09-18 ch 19, | abuseNice... LUvd it! Good job thereI applaud you...*CLAPS* okay, that's enough. |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abusehi, yeah. i'm reviewing my own story 'cause, umm...**scratches head** well, idk why i'm reviewing, but my story kicks ass! |
| Carnival Casualties 2007-09-16 ch 3, | abuseit's just you seem very fake emo. and fake emo are all the people who listen to MCR now. >_> i remember back when emo kids dressed like rivers from weezer and listened to stuf like rites of spring and fugazi. now they're all "WAH. I'M SAD. I WEAR ALL BLACK. I HAVE MY HAIR IN MY EYES." they're losers and it gives the 90s emo kids (and the few kids who've stayed with that) a bad name. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-09-16 ch 19, | abuseGood chapter. It is it the end or what? The story is still saying it's in progress. So they died, right? That's so sad. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2007-09-16 ch 19, | abuseMuahahaha! I love myself! i'm going to/am writing a story about this guy who sits in front of me in math. so YOU WILL REVIEW! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! |
| Carnival Casualties 2007-09-14 ch 2, | abuseI actually wasn't flaming. But of course, you had to take it to offense. I was just saying that it wasn't very good, and you do make me slightly ashamed to be an MCR fan, but that's a personal thing. A Mary Sue is basically every character in your story. They're all cliche, overdone, and there's nothing special about any of them. They're just cliche, plain and simple. |
| soojinyeh 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseLove it. Review me please. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-09-13 ch 18, | abuseAwesome chapter although it was obvious he would double cross them by the summary. Please update very soon! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| upsidedown.underwater 2007-09-13 ch 2, | abuselol...nice job :] |
| upsidedown.underwater 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseim not really a fan of like chapters decicated to just background info, but this was ok... |
| Altlover172 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseO, I like it! Though I prefer Frank over Gerard.. 8D. |
| Carnival Casualties 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuseI have to say that this is horribly Mary Sue. And on a more personal note, you make me slightly ashamed to be a My Chemical Romance fan. |
| KytC 2007-09-11 ch 17, | abuseinteresting concept the point of view shifting provides double the information but try not to remove the qualities that are male. |
| kandi.cafe 2007-09-11 ch 17, | abuse"So I started to get worried when these people didn’t start panicking right away..." Oh noez, whut is gonna happen? D8 I just found your story today and I have to say, it's pretty good. Even if the characters are heavily steroetyped, I really liked reading it! Can't wait 'til the next update~ |