'Shakespeare couldn't have written us any better.' This line is so perfect in every way. This poem builds up emotion from start to finish and powerful but still managing to be beautiful.

-C.N

I love how you build it up, making the two of you feel so powerful. In the first stanza we have this feeling of love that will last forever. Then in the last line you make it all come crashing down, reminding the reader that you never did say how long it would last.

I really liked your formatting (your use of bold/italics/underline actually enhanced the poem) and the line 'Shakespeare couldn't have written us any better.'

powerful, wickedly awesome. Great poem. Keep it up!
Faith

"Shakespeare couldn't have written us any better" This is beautiful. It's definitely a familiar feeling, being absolutely immortal by the side of the one that you love, and then eventually it goes away.