Wow...

That was brilliant! The plot, the characters. It was all so intricate and amazing! I loved it! Have you continued this story?

Didn't see many errors, just one or two scattered about. Though I will admit, I did get confused at first. I thought I missed the first part of the story, but once I read past that it sucked me in. Great story!

WOW!! Amazing plot and character development. I'm surprised that there aren't more reviews for this story. It's definitely book worthy. Don't remember seeing any grammatical errors. I also like the expected twists and the maturity in this tale. Sometimes authors on Fictionpress are just too young. This definitely is not cliche or immature. Good work.

Wow.

FANTASTIC.

*re-reads last chapter in awe*

*adds story/you to favorites list*

I love this story. you should definitely publish. you have no idea how much i cried when court died, and it's hard to make me cry. you should be proud of yourself. i wouldn't change anything about it.

that was a good story
the plot was interesting but i think there were a lot of loose ends- like wat happens with ryan-didnt he love her? so mayb u should embellish onto wat happens with him
also i think that mayb u should make her wanting out of everything more gradual and yes you do drop hints but u should make her consider dropping out of everything,including the sanctucci stuff, more seriously and embellish on it
and the flashbacks mayb u should spread them more evenly out coz usually theres a whole chunk of them together

otherwise its an uber-awsome story, its really cool and when u hav the time to edit it u should coz wen its polished i bet it'll turn out really really good. lookin forward to the sequel

I'm a little confused at to why Keetan burned down the building.

I like Keetan quite a bit less at this point... >:(

I actually kind of like Cari. She's spiffy-ish. Not spiffy yet, but getting close.

And I REALLY like Keeton. He's fricking awesome! Totally spiffy.

GRRAAHH!! Still confuzzled. Ah well...
What is Shane to the Chinese mob exactly? That's my question...

Hmm, a pinch confuzzled. How old is Shane?

O... spiffy!! I can't wait to check it... ^__^

Just wondering... Did you write anything for the next book? I know this is your oldest story, and you've progressed past it, but I loved this series and it still hasn't ended.

Wow. Court is dead... and Kimberly is a **. I really started to like her in #3. Now? Not so much. Please tell me you are working on the next (and last?) one! I cannot believe you would just leave their stories hanging like that. And why do you want to take the series down? It's a wonderful series for people to stumble upon and read. Please keep up the good work.

Shocking, but it somehow it fit. You are truly an amazing talent. You make all your characters believable and I can't help but love Shane. The whole series has been one that I can't stop until I finish it. Never stop writing and I won't stop reading.