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| destinyparadise144 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abusecool...my stories are very very MAD indeed. That is how I feel. My name means "supplanter" what the hell is that all about? I wish my name were something else, like for instance, Naomi, that's cool. JACKI aka. jACQUELINE (YUK!EUERGH, I HATE MY NAME< BANE OF MY LIFE) |
| darlingxdahlia 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abusethat was well written. I enjoyed it :) |
| Sly87 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseWow, very nicely done! I like how you seemed able to personify the name through thoughts, feelings, and how people relate to it...if that makes any sense at all. I really enjoyed reading that, and though I am by no means a professor (or even a critic) I think it's an excellent piece to be turned in as an assignment. ^_^ |
| lupine-eyes 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseIts quite introspective, this peice. An exploration of a mere word, and all the facets, every meaning. I quite like the last line. Your name doesn't define you- you make it your own. I especaially like the Romeo and Juliet reference. All in all, an excallent peice. Your professor should be happy. |