Aw that ending was very sweet

Aww! I love the last part! At first, you really get this intense feeling that he's gonna get his heart broken and then she comes back to "finish the experiment". Even though the kiss did seem slightly sudden, it was still a very cute story! But you may want to put "And then she kissed him." in its own paragraph; it'll highlight it more.

KEEP IT UP!

I found this a little confusing, I wasn't quite sure what's going on, but I did like it - especially, the first paragraph.

aw it's so sweet! i can imagine mark blushing and furiously trying to hide it. Hehe.
=summerdazed=