This is really cool! You should post more often! This makes me feel better about myself. :) keep it up!

its got a great idea, but how the begining is short, staccatto lines changes to the end with longer and more detailed kindof detracts from the whole overall idea. its got a great message though.

Wow. Its suc a captivating piece. Makes me shiver when i stop to think about it. It's simple yet can be taken in so ma ny different deep and intriguing ways. FANTASTIC!

By the way...Thankyou for Reviewing me! Very much appreciated. Thanks!

hey! this is really good for a first piece of work! i like that though it started off a little sad, in the end there is hope and strength. you're gonna write some masterpieces soon. ^_^
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