aww..
those poor boys!
i wish i could just hug the poor things.. >.<
sure hope they get their happy ending!
anyways, keep up the awesome writing!
cya next chapter ^^

Oy, I like your concept. LOVE shota/shounen ai, though at the moment, it cant EXACTLY be considered a shota story. More like containing abuse. Anyrate, you should work a little on keeping your tense straight, you keep going form present to past. And some of the scenes, like the 'getting food' part, was a little less than realistic. I mean, "Yeah I think my son is gay, so go bang him, ha ha." ...eh...it's kind of lacking somthing...

Anyrate, I'd like to see more from this, and i'm glad to have found someone currently in a similar position as myself: New stuff, needing reviews.
It's so disheartening sometimes to see other people with 20 reveiws on a story and then go back and look at your 3...all from friends you know personally.

If you'd like, come check out some of mine. I write shounen ai and crazy stuff and need reveiws. ;P