i can't really judge a poem for its form cuz, first, i don't know that much about poetry, and second, english is not my first language.

but i can tell you i liked it, even if maybe i can't complety appreciate it. i liked how you conveyed the emotions, how you made me feel the bittersweet power of your memories, that's mine too, the same feeling of anyone who have lost a loved one.

I know I've reviewed this privately, but I thought I would tell you again how very wonderful it is, and that I think it is a magnificent tribute to so someone you loved so much.

A good poem, which I enjoyed reading. A good use of rhythm and repetition, though towards the end it begins to lose its effectiveness. But that's a minor point. A wonderful poem about the power of memory. Well done.