This is wonderful! Wow! It truly does make you think twice about what you would do with a book like that and just how deeply you could mess up a life or endanger everyone. I love it. I found this on the adopt a plot threads on the NaNo boards. My username there is rangeralone. Feel free to buddy me! I truly enjoyed your work. Are you planning on publishing this one day? I think you should consider it. It has such merrit.

Love the revised ending!! Very awesome, and just as sweet as ever!! ^_^

Squee! You put the ending up already!! And I'm still grinning from ear to ear ^_^ Adored it!! Absolutely perfect ending!! lol, and I like the name change too, although it took me a moment to realise what the update was when I got it :P I'm a bit slow tonight. But anyway, totally awesome, and I'm so glad that you found an ending for it, cos it was brilliant!! Well done girl!! ^_^

Awe, so sweet! And I liked the twist with Arela ending up in hospital instead of Derek! Nice one! Bring on the epilogue!! ^_^

You and your evil cliffhangers!! What's she gonna do without the book? And I know Derek has to live, but how? They're stuck! Gah, I need more girl! Please post more up soon!!

Oh god. So didn't see that coming!! Poor Derek ... he'd better not die, or if he does, Arela better use that damn book of hers to bring him back! Evil pirates!! You so have to update this real soon, cos it would be very mean if you left me hanging for too long!!

Crap. Stupid Arela, not being able to swim!! But talk about a dramatic chapter!! Loved it!! And stupid Gwen not wanting to leave the boat! I'm glad Derek tossed her overboard! lol, I would have loved to have seen the indignant look on her face ^_< Anyway, SO can't wait for the next one!!

Big storm and a boat full of kids. Fun! But hopefully Derek won't be on board ... but then again, I have a feeling that he will be ... Awesome chapter!! Please update with more soon!! ^_^

Yacht, on water, full of people that Arela hates, and a magic journal ... why can I see her sinking the boat? Or conjuring a storm? Or something equally disasterous? Either way, it's gonna end badly, I just know it. And poor Derek, I felt so sorry for him in this chapter! Arela should have at least let him talk. Stubborn girl. Oh well, I can't wait to see what the next chapter holds!!

I. Hate. Gwen!! **! Evil, evil **!! Allison should have slapped her! Just when Arela and Derek were getting closer, she had to ruin it! *Cries* So not fair!! ... Awesome chapter by the way! Can't wait to read the next one!! ^_^

Still Amazing! Good writing skills,and I think this story has a good storyline. Keep writing more chapters so everyone can find out what happens to Arela.

Awe, she dropped out of the play! Oh well, I kinda thought she would. But yay for Cupid Alli!! ^_^ And speaking of Alli, does she have a little crush on Jack herself? I'd like to see some romance for Allison, and Jack doesn't seem that bad, even if he was chasing Gwen. Anyway, can't wait to see what eventuates from Alli's plan, so write more soon!! ^_^

Me thinks that Felicity might not hate Arela. Could Ela possibly have a friend there? And Jack as an actor? Weird ... but he has a point - what's gonna happen with the play? Will Arela still play the pirate queen? I hope so ... and have Derek steal the show to be the one she kisses! Maybe he arranges an 'accident' for Jack ^_< lol, and I was right about Felicity and Derek! Good little Der was just trying to sober her up! Anyway, next chapter!

the meeting has nothing to do with modelling now does it? :P

another great chapter Anji, the story is getting along real well.

Even though i probably dont need to mention it as you already know, the newest chapter is brilliant, (of course as well as the rest of the book :P) and i hope to see more of it soon.

and yea, ela needs to start becoming more of a people person, but i guess thats kinda what this book is about :) good work sofar Anjirika.