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| DiaRose 2007-09-25 ch 1,  | abuseYou have such a way to weave poetic words into a thought. It's so original, and so nice. Love, ~Dia |
| Blissfully Sarcastic 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseI don't much like the last line. It doesn't flow. But, then again, without it you'll have no title. So that's understandable. It's intersting. Very interesting. Mwa ha, ha. ^^ |
| Ramenluver 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseHaha. Like the whole image of him dancing on his tomb. Funny in a dark way. -Ramen |
| Salister 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuseHad you've taken away the title, I still would've known what you were conveying. This poem is overrunning with emotion, and woven with a hint of bitterness. As always, well done!! |
| rira-chan 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuselots of emotion in this. very good job! i liked it very much ~rira-chan |
| kloun doll 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abusethat was funny, I don't know, dark humor. |