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| Night Silver's whisper 2007-09-09 ch 1,  | abuseThere are two lines here that just astounded my readers eyes. "Naively overlooking time, "that wrinkled all these hopes of mine." As well as this line, especially this one. It really called to something in me. It seemed deeper than the rest, and it was a perfect authoress's choice to put it at the end as the conclusion. "I can patch my quilt to block the cold, "but through the fabric leaks my soul." My gods you authoress. I cannot impart any compliments to explain that one. Night Silver's Whisper |
| Ramenluver 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseLove this line "I can patch my quilt to block the cold but through the fabric leaks my soul." The imagery is startling on it's own account. :) You earned a smiley. lol -Ramen |
| Salister 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuseThis poem intrigues me, as it actually leaves something open to contemplate on. I, for one saw two different themes within it. Though that may have not been your intent, it is how I interpreted it, because it is a broad piece in nature. I enjoy poetry that makes me think. |