Poor Drayden! It's a good beginning keep it up.

Nice. Very, very nice. I noticed a couple of spelling errors-- "mad" instead of "made," and "foreword" instead of "forward."

Anyway, I'm really interested in Kamyll, because, yeah. I like Kamyll. And the Magician is so mysterious. Basically, I want you to write more... and quickly, please. XD

That was intense. I enjoyed it very much. On to the next chapter! =D