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Ronnie 2008-09-22 ch 2, anon.	abuseI love the appearance of Jack and Talia. They seem like an adorable addition to this story. The naked toddler bit was so cute! Love this story so far, cannot wait to hear more of it. :D
rebelforever 2008-09-10 ch 2,	abuseI just finished reading So Much to Learn yesterday and loved it so I decided to read this sequel, which is also awesome. Are you going to continue this story?
emmie 2008-07-22 ch 2, anon.	abusei really hope you update soon. [:
Lebikse 2008-07-16 ch 2,	abuseI love the story:D Update please?
For What Its Worth 2008-06-30 ch 2,	abuseI don't believe the bad boy and the good girl can never make a go of things. In Alex and Grace's case, however, she is far too needy to be considered the typical 'good girl'. The stereotype just doesn't fit. Did I mention you are awesome for writing a sequel? So is this six years after the end of the last one, or six years since they finished college? It is very interesting to see Talia from someone else's view.
VirginiaVortex 2008-05-11 ch 2,	abuseAre you ever going to update this? I really like what you have so far; it's good to have insight into Alex's psyche. Update please??
Huddles 2008-05-01 ch 1,	abuseTalia/Jack, Simone/Micky, Alex/Grace:D I am in love with every single one of these pairings! (Oh no, that didn't quite come out right.) This is the second time I've read these two chapters of the story, and I really hope you will update soon:D:D It's only been two-chapters-long so far and the story has already got me addicted O: Both characters depicted are so intriguing I can't help but want to read more(:
Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-04-29 ch 2,	abuseHeres your birthday present- belated or on time i have no idea :D I really liked this; Im interested as to graces reaction when she sees alex! :D Keep writing, I'm a fan.
I. Gorelik 2008-04-23 ch 1,	abuseI forgot to mention, I think the third person point of view fits with this. I think it's because I prefer third over any other, although the first person POV, in So Much to Learn, didn't bother me as much. I wonder.. Did you you ever find pictures for how you picture your characters? I would love to know how you pictured them in your head, because although I don't have any specific ones to show you of how I kept imagining them, I constantly had a clear imagined of what every (or almost every) character looked like.
I. Gorelik 2008-04-23 ch 2,	abuseI see the story hasn't been updated in under a year, but I do believe reviews should be given where they're worth, and this story is worth it. I love So Much to Learn so, so much, but as it was a completed story, any critiques that I had while reading, I figured, wouldn't have mattered. I'm probably wrong there because I loved the story, and should have left a review either way. One then I noticed, though, is a lot of the times "then" is used for "than". I haven't seen the problem vice versa, so just to clear it up, "than" is a comparison and "then" is time, i.e. "I'll go out and eat first, THEN come over" and "I would rather eat THAN come over." I hope that helped clear something up, but I'm no grammar Nazi. I rarely even notices mistakes for that reason. Although.. I did find many times there were places were commas were needed and some words were spelled wrong, but that could be a South-Australian thing? I also love that you are Australian. I absolutely adore English, Irish, and Australian accents. I will get weak in the knees and become a puddle of goop. :) I'm so happy Alex gets recognition in this story. I'm also happy we get both his childhood and adulthood. I'm sure there will be a huge difference in attitude and personality, although at heart I bet he'll always be a bad boy. I loved Talia's and Jack's appearance with their two girls. The ending seemed like one of those "happy but my heart is crushed anyway" endings. The email helped things, and although Jack said he was content and happy, it didn't seem enough. This chapter did show that they have grown up, they're more mature, they're more happy, but they're still the same people who were in college - in love with each other, and still hold the same young, humorous personality when it comes with their good mates. I personally would have loved a one-shot of the adventure between Simone and Micky. First off, I love the insults that Micky and Talia shoot at each other. They sound angry, yes, but they sound so childish that it's hilarious. I bet my sister thought I was weird laughing in my room, alone and out of no where. And secondly, I feel like I got the clearer image of the two than any other character. They didn't appear too often, but I guess I just love the arrogant, cocky, cute-when-then-smirk guys. And I love strawberry blond, wavy hair and gray eyes (not necessarily together, but the two in general I love). But I guess they got their story in already so there really wouldn't have been much need for another, if not just a one-shot. Well, this story hasn't been updated in close to a year's time, but I hope it hasn't been forgotten. Forgive any of my own spelling and grammar mistakes. :)
Boo 2008-04-03 ch 2, anon.	abusethe idea with the sequel sounds lovely!! your story is perfect as always. detailed enough, some intriguing plot included. it's like some atmosphere is there in your stories:)) It was awesome to read about Talia and Jack. It was even better to know that they are happy together. I hope it stays that way:)) They are both now family people, with children. and reading about them is comforting and...well, cozy:)) I hope you update soon enough, I wish you the best of luck for this story(and other ones;))
whildchild 2008-03-22 ch 2,	abuseHey. I read like all of this and So Much to Learn today. It was awesomne. You should be so proud of these works of fiction. You rock! Please keep going! Smiles Whild
rainbabie 2008-01-29 ch 2,	abuseThis is great. I can't wait for your next chapter!
StarEyed14 2008-01-27 ch 2,	abusemickey and simone broke up? are we going to find out why?
Lola 2008-01-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseI have loved this couple since they first showed up in so much to learn. You cannot believe my excitement when I saw you were writing their story. I check back every day in the hopes you've updated. While I love all of your stories, there is something about the heart of these two that seems to rip me apart every time I re-read it. Any updates from you are wonderful, and I understand it takes time, but there are those out there who appreciate immensely what you do, and hope their encouragement helps motivate you to do more.

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