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Twinkies
Tytherpol
2007-10-04
ch 1,
abuse
this is good. so sardonic lol.
the caps-lock lines really add to it i think.
"YOU WONT LAST FOR EVER/so don't believe/in this love after life" --awesome.
good job. -ty.
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