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Wilson, Brooks Alexander 2009-03-04 . chapter 1
Well spoken "mia". It flows well, and it is succinct. nice job.
miscellanea 2008-05-29 . chapter 1
Oh, good, good! My favorite part of the poem was when you say "Play again?" I think that maybe you should keep the reader guessing for longer - only put in a mention of a toy at the very end. Otherwise, really good. Write more poetry, please.
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