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musicalady 2007-09-21 ch 1,	abuseYou should never stop your tears. When that happens you're bottling up the things that make us truly human. Good work though, it describes how most people are when they have some years under their belt. Its also a horrible thing to teach your children. So I advise you friend, that if you have to cry, then cry.
Exodus.Escence Of Sin 2007-08-25 ch 1,	abuseNice poem overall. i thought that the rhyming was choppy but good poetry seems to be like that in most cases. I love how you put so much emotion into this piece and i envy you for that . continue writting because from this poem i can sense that you have some good potential. Lost.In.A.Lullaby