WOW, this could be a song... i started singing it... :) but either way it's great.

my favorite part: i'm your antidote
i'm your poison
i'm your cure

that's a sweet poem.

'there is no antidote for love'
'there's only the you and the me'
i like the way you italicized the you and me, and also, that's a great line.

this is a really great poem, and very original. i like it.

You made good use of parentheses I think. The poem also seems to tell a story, which I like. Good job.

Oh! When I first wrote this the first thing that came to mind was 'bad girl'. It kinda reminds me of a situation I was in, but I was the one who was hesitant.

I love how you set up this poem and how things flow so nicely.

"our lips only separated by a thin breath of air" was my favorite line. It gives you such a great visual and got me sucked into the story from the very beginning.

Congradulations! You get a gold star. Sorry...I was dying to say that to someone that I reviewed today, but you were the lucky winner.

I like this poem ALOT. You totally took advantage of the topic, great one by the way, and turned it into a masterpiece. Excellent. I enjoyed reading this.

~Kat

Loved this one

fav lines;

i'm your antidote
i'm your poison
i'm your cure

~rira-chan

p.s thanks for the reveiw